7-1 Journal: Final Project Feedback Assignment

Project Feedback
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Introduction
I showed proficiency in a number of areas such as writing and collection of data. I achieved this in a diverse style since I was aware of what I was researching. Disseminating the information and describing it was a very good skill that I made use of in the work. Some of the research exercises are hard to conduct due to constraints of time and finances. In order to improve my writing skills, I have to consider the feedback from my instructor. I have received instructions from him, and he suggests some areas where I must improve in order to present a better work. I was not concise and clear in the areas that the tutor pointed.
Areas that I Need to Improve
My analysis indicates that I should consider the instructions carefully. The instructor also noted that I seem to deviate from the main point when I am presenting my work. I also fail to support claims with research data. These are key areas where should improve my work to be credible. Citing properly and acknowledging an author when the information I am giving is not original is critical of the credibility of my journal. In areas that the instructor noted I should put more information, I will do so by putting credible information from research data.
Areas that I Disagree with my Tutor and the Steps for Improvements
I also disagree slightly with the instructor on the style of writing and the information that I provide. Some of the research exercises are hard to conduct due to constraints of time and finances.

I disagree with the instructor because I think I am using the correct style and I do not have to make the work similar to the published journals. I also think that the information is correct as long as I cite properly. I, however, need to look into the main points that the instructor has given me to improve the general quality of my work. Reviewing the work that I have done from proofreading is important as it allows you to correct various writing mistakes. My instructor also noted that I had not made a proper conclusion; I think it is because I did not restate the thesis. Concluding a piece of work with the problem statement, the thesis and a summary of the solutions is important.