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Hello Breonna,
Having read your annotated bibliography, I have some comments and observations that I will share with you. First, I appreciate that the sources you used and the summary that accompanies them, can give a reader a glimpse of the subject you are interested in working on. I think you are working on the culture of motorcyclists and their place in the society. I would have suggested that you put the heading of the topic you are working on so that it could be more comfortable for readers to relate it to the sources that you have chosen.
Secondly, you have focused so much on the history of motorcyclists and biker gangs. I would have suggested that you include one source that gives the background of the topic and the rest could be articles that discuss the reception (prejudice or acceptance) of the bikers in the society today.
Thirdly, you did not tell us how the various articles would be necessary for your research work. I believe that you should always give a summary of the report, and then provide the relevance of the particular source as well as its credibility to use for the specific research.
Fourthly, I think the topic is unique and would give the readers interest to know the prejudice that bikers have gone through over the years as well as today. Personally, I did not know that bikers have usually been linked to criminal behaviors. I think it is a fun sport. I would like to read your last paper and learn.
The annotated bibliography was excellent despite the presence of minor grammatical errors such as when you say, “…saying that their freedom riders…” instead of “saying that they are free riders…”