Peer review

Peer Review
1. The thesis is clear because it justifies and has a stand to the presented discussion. The author’s thesis is the advantages and the disadvantages of Nitrous Oxide as a result of its installation in the vehicles for the reason of modification.
2. The introduction part of the essay has given the readers a clear guide of what to expect in the essay. The introduction has the hook which in this case the writer has mentioned the cars; this alone draws the reader’s attention and makes them want to read more. The writer has also included the connecting information which comprises talking about modification of cars and the reasons for the modification; this already makes a reader understand the topic.
3. Each paragraph of the essay has a topic sentence which has plainly identified the points that the writer has to make concerning the subject. The introductory given in each paragraph is also satisfactory. The topic sentences given have shown the direction to be taken by the paragraph; for example, in the second paragraph, the topic was “what is Nitrous Oxide” while the controlling idea here was “the pros and cons of Nitrous Oxide” (Anonymous, 2018). The writer has proved the topic sentences by giving more information and facts and also giving a description in detail; the conclusions are also objective.
4. The quotations in the essay are well put and are enough; there is no need to summarize. The writer has explained very well in the second paragraph how the vehicle’s horsepower is increased.

In the last paragraph, the writer has plainly stated the requirements before installing the Nitrous.
5. There is no repetition in the essay, and the writer has stuck to the topic. Every paragraph relates to the thesis; the information given by the writer is enough, and there is no need of summarizing it. The points given by the writer provide an adequate understanding of the topic, and no areas should be further developed.
6. The conclusion has restated the thesis of the essay which connects with the rest of the paragraphs. The conclusion has an impressive final statement that the cons outweigh the pros of Nitrous Oxide.
7. The citations are correct following the correct APA format, and the quotation marks have been used correctly with a signal phrase in every quotation.
8. The grammar of the essay is generally acceptable given the minimal grammatical errors or issues.
Reference
Anonymous. (2018). The pros and cons of Nitrous Oxide. 1