Improving Business Messages

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Improving Business Messages
SUBJECT: Follow Up to Call
Hello Jen:
Firstly, allow me to express my gratitude for your yesterday’s call. It was a pleasure to have had a chance to talk to you finally. You gave me the impression that you have an amazing culture in your company. The opportunity to join the Workforce Engagement Consortium (WEC) would greatly benefit you.
We had the chance to talk about several of those benefits earlier. Be that as it may, allow me to give a brief highlight once again of the key benefits enjoyed by the member companies of the WEC. Furthermore, this overview will help in deciding whether to join the consortium. To begin with, the most fundamental advantages enjoyed by member companies encompass workshops and training, business discounts, and networking opportunities.
Perhaps, the workshop and training package is the most popular service that members of the WEC enjoy. In fact, this service is enjoyed by over 95% of members every month. We hold key workshops after every seven days on a wide range of topics on performance management. These workshops are posted on the internet to facilitate easy access. Members can also enjoy over one hundred and forty distance training sessions provided by the WEC.
Moreover, we hold weekly networking events that are hosted in different places each Tuesday night by one of our member partners. Additionally, these occasions attract 50 to 61 experienced workers from various industries (Zambreskie and Asksins, p.

1). Here, WEC members have the opportunity to develop their professional network. Correspondingly, these events come packed with entertaining activities, including trivia contests, and wine-tasting to mention but a few. In short, these activities are a good way to break the boredom and create new friendships.
We also negotiate intercompany discounts for our members using our network that is made up of over 60 companies globally. In this regard, members enjoy discounts between 5-8% in a wide range of B2B and consumer retailers. Last year, an average WEC member saved around $7,000 thanks to this initiative.
WEC offers three levels of membership as summarized in the table below;
Membership Level Cost Benefits
Platinum Memberships
$5,000
Up to ten employees are allowed access to networking events.
Gold Membership
$3,000 Up to ten employees are allowed access to networking events
Regular Membership $2000 A maximum of three employees can attend ten distance training sessions and workshops monthly.
As a closing remark, allow me to articulate my appreciation once again for taking notice of this consortium. It will be much appreciated if you could join the team. In case of any equations, feel free to contact me.
Work Cited
Zambreskie Sabrina and Asksins Jen. Writing Exercise: Improve Business Messages. N.d. Pdf